We're born;
We live;
We die;
Or so it seems...

So it seems,
Time will pass,
And children get older,
I'll get older too.

So it seems,
In my dreams,
I'm getting bolder,
Falling in love with you.

So it seems,
The world will end.
I'd rather get older,
Falling in love with you.

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Not my best works, but Read, Rate, Enjoy...

Pretty good, or at least I liked it, I typically leave criticism to other more experienced poets though.

thanks.

I generally do that too, but it's good.

Do what?

It's all right for a freeverse poem. Everything seems to be kept in a rather readable amount of beats per line. The last line may be about 1 beat off, but other than that it's a pretty good piece.