This is a poem I have written recently, I'm not sure how good it is but other people tell me it is pretty good so I figured I would post it here. It has some influence from the Insane Clown Posse.

Some say I will be a killer
I never cared what others thought of me
If I ever need a time filler
I will bring my hatchet with me
I will make others share my pain
Always making me feel like I don't belong
Making me feel like a bane
I am always alone, maybe I don't belong
All I ever wanted was a friend
Maybe I will find a friend when I go to the Carnival
All I ever needed was a friend
Everyone is friends; everyone is family in the Dark Carnival.

Odd, a little morbid, but showing serious feeling. I suggest you continue writing.

alright, a good first attempt at poetry. I suggest, just as DM did, that you continue writing for MRM.

Thanks for the feedback, I have been starting to right more, might have to post some of my other poems.

One, I didn't like rhyming "Carnival" with itself. Two, I really enjoyed the rest, though as DM put it, slightly morbid.

You got a talent for it, now we'll see what else you can do.

Certainly a thought-provoking piece. Reminiscent of some certain songs as well as poetry... Good luck in future writing!