|
Monster Rancher Metropolis: Library: Fan Fiction, Poetry, Birthday List, Links & Non-Fiction Archive: Epics In Progress, Section III: Tournament of Legends- Finals Part 3 By MrGG on Sunday, April 11, 2004 - 12:40 pm:
Lighting rippled through the massive bulk of the dark creature as drool and snot fell before him. He fell to his hands and knees gasping for air and the monstrous Durahan walked closer with a sort of cockiness in his strut. He walked behind Zeke and raised his blade, would it be the final slash he swung? Meanwhile, the only people who could view the fight were those who had gone home. The T.V. crews were watching in a helicopter and the arena was empty. By Da_Mullet on Sunday, April 11, 2004 - 01:25 pm: By MrGG on Sunday, April 11, 2004 - 01:46 pm: By Da_Mullet on Sunday, April 11, 2004 - 06:35 pm: short, and kinda morbid, as no one in the torney survives. By DarkBlitzX on Monday, April 12, 2004 - 12:23 pm: It looks like you rushed this one, and I always think the endoing chapter should be one of the better chapters in the story By MrGG on Monday, April 12, 2004 - 01:03 pm: This was rushed. I just didn't want to leave this as an unfinished story... =/ By DarkPalidan on Monday, April 12, 2004 - 03:15 pm: I agree with Da_mullet, odd and morbid. Not quite as good, as the other chapters but still fairly good. By Icelord13 on Monday, April 12, 2004 - 04:25 pm: Man, usually the last chap is the longest. this was kinda dissappointing. By CHB on Monday, April 12, 2004 - 08:51 pm: I wasn't impressed. It was three paragraphs long. By DarkBlitzX on Tuesday, April 13, 2004 - 12:57 pm: i dunoo....if ur not gonna try, then do do it at all, u know By DarkBlitzX on Tuesday, April 13, 2004 - 12:58 pm: By MrGG on Tuesday, April 13, 2004 - 04:04 pm: I may do different ending.. This one is not good. By Octavius on Saturday, July 10, 2004 - 01:13 pm: |