Prison of the Murderer

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By Icelord13 on Wednesday, January 21, 2004 - 08:13 pm:

I wrote this one pretty quick. I liked it, kinda along the lines of the joker one. Free verse, but no real message. Just a nice little poem. Hope you like it!

Prison of the Murderer

I wish to leave this place one day,
To one day walk with feet unbound.
To release my hold on cold steel,
I wish to be done with it all.

I feel with hands unnaturally cold,
As if I am not of the living.
Yet a soul I am, trapped inside,
A stainless steel prison.

I don’t feel love,
Nor compassion.
I don’t feel, anything at all,
I only hear the clank of the metal hitting the ground.

I long to stretch my toes one day,
Into the blades of grass.
To feel the warmth of the sun again,
Like the past I once knew.

To release this blasted steel I carry,
Only used to block and parry.
The only thing I do feel is pain,
The pain of both mind and body alike.

I am the monster they call a Durahan,
A helpless soul caged in completely.
Never again will see with my eyes,
Or hear with my ears.

I have only what I am given,
By the mighty lord himself.
This is my punishment, for a life,
A life filled with blood and violence.

I fought, and killed,
For this I am bound,
Bound to walk in my armor forever,
Never to drop my blade or loosen my grip on it.

I am a Durahan, a walking armor,
This is what I deserved.
In life I killed, and inflicted pain,
For that I am cursed to wonder the earth in this horrible prison, the prison that is me…

Hope you liked it! -Icelord13


By Pattongeneral on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 11:54 am:

Very nice, Icelord! Once again, you have made me think. I never really thought of a Durahan being a killer that was trapped in his armour forever. Very nice!


By The ShaMan on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 12:38 pm:

DUDE!!!AWESOME-NESS!!! This poem like portraits a murder's soul trapped forever in a suit of armor,Like Chuckie! only this guy feels remorse.your best work yet,so sayeth the ShaMan!


By Da_Mullet on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 02:51 pm:

**blinkblink**I am still in awe. I don't know how you do it. You say you just cranked it out, but it still is one of the best Durahan fanfics, and the best poem, I have ever read.**blinblink**


By BlackRipper on Friday, January 23, 2004 - 01:39 pm:

Every think of becoming a poet i really like this one i think it's hard to do poems wit out rhyms but this was azaming