I wrote this one pretty quick. I liked it, kinda along the lines of the joker one. Free verse, but no real message. Just a nice little poem. Hope you like it!
Prison of the Murderer
I wish to leave this place one day, To one day walk with feet unbound. To release my hold on cold steel, I wish to be done with it all.
I feel with hands unnaturally cold, As if I am not of the living. Yet a soul I am, trapped inside, A stainless steel prison.
I don’t feel love, Nor compassion. I don’t feel, anything at all, I only hear the clank of the metal hitting the ground.
I long to stretch my toes one day, Into the blades of grass. To feel the warmth of the sun again, Like the past I once knew.
To release this blasted steel I carry, Only used to block and parry. The only thing I do feel is pain, The pain of both mind and body alike.
I am the monster they call a Durahan, A helpless soul caged in completely. Never again will see with my eyes, Or hear with my ears.
I have only what I am given, By the mighty lord himself. This is my punishment, for a life, A life filled with blood and violence.
I fought, and killed, For this I am bound, Bound to walk in my armor forever, Never to drop my blade or loosen my grip on it.
I am a Durahan, a walking armor, This is what I deserved. In life I killed, and inflicted pain, For that I am cursed to wonder the earth in this horrible prison, the prison that is me…
Hope you liked it! -Icelord13
By Pattongeneral on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 11:54 am:
Very nice, Icelord! Once again, you have made me think. I never really thought of a Durahan being a killer that was trapped in his armour forever. Very nice!
By The ShaMan on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 12:38 pm:
DUDE!!!AWESOME-NESS!!! This poem like portraits a murder's soul trapped forever in a suit of armor,Like Chuckie! only this guy feels remorse.your best work yet,so sayeth the ShaMan!
By Da_Mullet on Thursday, January 22, 2004 - 02:51 pm:
**blinkblink**I am still in awe. I don't know how you do it. You say you just cranked it out, but it still is one of the best Durahan fanfics, and the best poem, I have ever read.**blinblink**
By BlackRipper on Friday, January 23, 2004 - 01:39 pm:
Every think of becoming a poet i really like this one i think it's hard to do poems wit out rhyms but this was azaming