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Monster Rancher Metropolis: Library: Fan Fiction, Poetry, Birthday List, Links & Non-Fiction Archive: Poetry: Of Galis and Jokers By The ShaMan on Tuesday, December 16, 2003 - 12:00 pm:
Cloaks not filled with bodies, By The ShaMan on Tuesday, December 16, 2003 - 12:01 pm: did you guys like this one? i dont think i rhymed the last stanza very well By Nate Railsback on Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 01:31 am: It's not an issue of rhyming, but one of cadence and rhythm. You need to get a steady pattern to the rhythm, in my opinion, though of course there's no one way to do poetry. Still looks relatively good. First stanza was the best. By CHB on Wednesday, December 17, 2003 - 01:44 am:
I'm with Nate. You choose the right grammar to rhyme, but you threw off the beat with more words before hand. |