A poem for Olaru

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By Nizzie on Saturday, August 23, 2003 - 03:35 pm:

In Memory of Olaru, a true Master.

You were strong through all the cold,
In Brillia's mountains, you were bold.
Fighting hard to get us by,
Your fur is icy, like the sky.
Thunder Bash, a Combo too.
Strong and silent, your no fool.
Every master falls to there knees,
Every monster turns to flee.
A fair fight it begins,
But in the end,you will win.
A cold gray stare is all it takes,
For you to see right through the fake.
You always understand the stakes,
But you come through it just like gates.
You try your best, and never pout,
Always winning every bout.
A special soul, rests in you.
You should be proud, Olaru.
One rest a month, with some food.
The Tochikan Festas are never too good.
Our strong bonds together, will break never.
From Takrama to Morx and the Goat Sea.
Finally stopping in Kalgari.
Where you at last grew you two beautiful horns,
On that bright and sunny morn.
When you reached the Final Four,
All of them fell to the floor.
You are a master, from a humble start,
Blessed with no Crystal Hearts.
But your eyes no longer gleam,
With a young ones happy sheen.
I remember your mistakes, but you will rest Among the greats.
So turn and Howl,
My old friend,
You may be nearing,
Your final end.
But rest easily in knowing.
You are the best, and you kept going.
You worked so hard, oh yes its true.
You are a tiger, my friend, Olaru.


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*Cries* waaaah! OLARU!


By Nate Railsback on Sunday, August 24, 2003 - 02:10 am:

What was the inspiration for the name, if I may ask? I always like interesting names.


By Nizzie on Sunday, August 24, 2003 - 08:42 am:

I dunno.. I make up most of my names! :D

I've had Daridun, Jiron, Olaru, Mythos,, Anubis... ok well anubis isnt original but, hw'd you like the poem?


By Nate Railsback on Sunday, August 24, 2003 - 06:56 pm:

It was neat. Avoided a lot of the cliche rhymes, too, which is always a plus.