Hiku

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By Plastic on Thursday, May 30, 2002 - 01:39 pm:

A Hiku written by Plastic as an Ode to Venus Gospel, my Noble Saurian


Strong, quick, stealthy and brave

Claws like swords, and teeth like blades

But dumb as a rock


Sad to say, thats the truth, he is great for battles, but can't find crap on expeditions. Visit my site, Plastic's Hall of Monsters and tell me about you favorite monster.


By Flare Reiketsu on Friday, May 31, 2002 - 04:55 am:

6 syllables in the first line. take out the and. It's pretty good!!!!! i like it.