The Journey of the Jells Ch.11

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By Jello on Tuesday, August 29, 2000 - 04:32 pm:

The Journey of the Jells

Chapter Eleven:The Bad, the Badder, the
Worst

The Phoenix and Mr.Freeze looked down at
the forest and the villages. It was clear they
were being shot at. They just didn’t see how
they were shooting from about four different
directions.
“Don’t worry, Freeze, we’ll mak--AHHHHH!!”
the Phoenix screamed in agony.
By some amazing stroke of luck, a Beam
Gun had made it’s way toward him just as a
misfired bullet went in front of it, and the Beam
Gun had knocked the bullet straight into the
heart of the Phoenix. The Phoenix and
Mr.Freeze plummeted to the ground.

***

Minion stared at the falling body. He saw the
Phoenix and the Jell separate in the air, the
Jell fall with a sickening crack, and the
Phoenix die in the air. It was over. Scorpio
cheered. Everybody looked stunned. It was
over. The Jells had won the war.

***

Otto looked out the window and saw Burner
die. He smiled. I bet everyone’s thinking
it’s over. Far from it.

The evil Automaton took out a bottle of green
liquid--and he poured it all over the dead
troops. Then he sat back and watched with
glee. Every monster that was dead now
wasn’t. In fact, the only thing they could do
was obey him, and that would be the end of
the ‘good’ guys. We’ll see...we’ll see.


***

Two Weeks Later...

Minion stepped up to the podium. The
audience and the seven billion people that
were watching on T.V. stood up and gave him
the applause he deserved. He responded
with a thank you and the usual “I’d like to thank
my wife for being there for me, also I want to
thank my girlfriend for being there for me.”
Scratch that. What he really said was “I’d like
to thank God, because without Him we
wouldn’t be here and we wouldn’t have made
it. I am also going to thank my friends for
being there.”
The president of FIMBA smiled. “Thank you,
Minion. And now, the next person who will
recieve the Medal of Honor--Baxter!”
Baxter hastily jumped up on the stage,
pushed pass the president, and came to the
mic.
“WehavetofindGengen. I know what he’s
going to do!”
A murmer went through the crowd. Then a
Kato jumped out of the crowd and took
something from inside Baxter. A green
glowing orb. Baxter gasped, then crumpled
and fell off the stage. The Kato jumped out the
window to the waiting helicopter. Baxter’s
special orb--the orb that Jells have inside--
was missing and the body was useless
without it. The orb contained Baxter--this was
just his body. Minion stared. ”No.”
A piece of paper floated down to the FIMBA
president. It said:
Baxter is MY friend...not yours. Don’t stick
your ugly nose where it don’t belong!


This was more of a plot builder than anything
else.


By Jello on Tuesday, August 29, 2000 - 04:32 pm:

I know it's short, but hey, everybody's gotta
have a plot builder, right?


By CHB on Tuesday, August 29, 2000 - 06:17 pm:

Yup yup. I think me and BR had at least one in our stories. Still sad that Burner is dead so quickly.


By Jello on Tuesday, August 29, 2000 - 07:31 pm:

Who says hes officialy dead? Its really not a
shame,even if I decided to really kill him (and I
just might leave him dead). If you liked
Burner, you'll LOVE Flame, though. Just hold
on and hope. And it would be a never ending
story if Burner lived forever...I like to change
things around.


By torey_luvullo on Wednesday, August 30, 2000 - 04:16 am:

hmmmm. let's see what's next.


By Black Razor on Thursday, September 14, 2000 - 05:39 pm:

Nothing wrong with a plot builder, or two, or three! If the story calls for some setting up, do so. I do think this chapter moved too quickly though.