My kato Tagon

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By Zilk the Rank S Master on Monday, June 22, 2009 - 04:33 pm:

There once was a kato named Tagon
He was sad at his empty flagon
so he ran to get rum
and fell on his bum
then he couldn't spit like a dragon

any suggestions on the last line???


By Zilk the Rank S Master on Tuesday, June 23, 2009 - 05:19 pm:

Sorry, i mean improving the last line.