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Monster Rancher Metropolis: Library: Fan Fiction, Poetry, Birthday List, Links & Non-Fiction Archive: Epics In Progress, Section III: The pixie sisters CH 2 chaos in the inn By foxman on Friday, September 22, 2006 - 01:30 am:
‘You will not harm us!’ screamed Kuin as the Gali officers divided to surround the friends, the head Gali replied calmly ‘don’t worry we wont harm all of you’ and he laughed menacingly, the Gali’s laughed as well their laughter ringing throughout the inn, suddenly the head Gali shrieked mask throw and the Gali obeyed as one all ripping off their masks to launch the lethal weapons, Kuin, after years of slicing the pitcher machine’s balls to shreds, lashed out, slicing three Gali masks to the floor, useless he blocked the other one and the head officer’s one was too fast it sliced his sword arm before returning to its master, the head officer laughed mercilessly at Kuin’s pain but Jona lashed out with a giga flame instantly killing the head officer, panicking the other Gali’s stumbled over in chaos until Lirna using her kiss calmed the officers down, then Juan leapt at the cops as he was noticed and struck by a Gali’s mask, he ignored it and swallowed all the Gali’s, suddenly becoming much bigger. the bartender, worried, hurried over to the companions; ‘quickly run out the back and run into the forest then go, far away from here, Kuin, here is your year’s pay in advance you have been helpful to the red sword inn, I will tell your master that you must follow your own course’ ‘yes’ replied Kuin wincing from the wound, ‘tell him I might come back one day to visit him.’ The bartender nodded ‘goodbye Kuin’ he said, tears reaching his eyes, ‘goodbye my old friend’ Kuin replied, tears stinging his eyes ‘may we meet again if fate decides’ and they departed the bartender rushing back to the bar to usher away a drunk monster from the beer tap. The companions left out the back door Kuin leaving last, a tear fell as he left the place that had been his home away from home, ‘goodbye’ he whispered. Hurrying out the door as he heard booted feet rushing to the inn door. As he closed the door he heard a scream, it was Vauna. Kuin rushed to the courtyard to see ten naga’s closing on the companions, Kuin watched they held them off but it would not be for long and he could already hear booted feet running to the back door of the inn. what do I do? Thought Kuin helplessly. By foxman on Friday, September 22, 2006 - 01:31 am: its short but i couldnt help that i didnt have time to think what to happen next so i wrapped it up By Sturnum94 on Saturday, September 23, 2006 - 11:54 am: Cool! It could have been longer, because your story captured me. Kuin is cool. He could probably finish those nagas with the spin-sword attack Durahans had in MR2. It could also have been in pragraph form, instead of everything jumbled up. Otherwise, awesome story. By Swezlon Uno on Saturday, September 23, 2006 - 12:01 pm: Very nice. Now I know why you wanted to know what a Durahan looked like. By foxman on Monday, September 25, 2006 - 05:35 am: mm durahan's are so cool the way they look plus kuin is a ruby knight durahan and it was in justify which made it all close together By foxman on Monday, September 25, 2006 - 06:23 am: i may not be able to post cos im moving By foxman on Monday, September 25, 2006 - 06:24 am: and i have a lot of work to do i will be posting by the 10th of october see youse By foxman on Monday, September 25, 2006 - 06:30 am: By Swezlon Uno on Monday, September 25, 2006 - 05:39 pm: Sorry to hear that foxman. See you later. By Sturnum94 on Saturday, September 30, 2006 - 09:10 am: See ya', Foxman. I can't wait for the 3rd chapter. I can't wait for Oct. 10. Sorry for not posting for a while. By Swezlon Uno on Saturday, September 30, 2006 - 10:05 am: Have you read my new one yet Sturnum? By Waddafxup 101 on Monday, July 16, 2007 - 07:03 pm: |